Ann Baret
6 InspiredWhile the Gold Remains. Autumn in Clarens, with tall trees in golden hues, dry grass beneath and a wide clear sky above. Watercolours and chalk, layered over her own photograph.
A very commendable transformation, and we particularly love what has happened in the sky. The gold needs to be more lavish though, especially in the field below the trees. The golden colour is there, but the field itself has to stand out, and gold leaf would have worked well. From a composition point of view, more field below and a little less sky. We have also taken out the tree on the left, because that side felt too heavy, and losing it gives the row of trees some breathing space and brings the balance back.